The Deer at Providencia

Annie Dillard purpose in this story is to tell about a deer that was hanging from a rope and struggling and she tells how the village boys would crowd around the deer and observe. The character in the story had pity for the deer and Dillard was trying to make a point on how people should have pity for animal suffering.

            To me while reading the story I had pity for the deer. Just like Dillard I don’t like to see an animal suffering. The descriptive details the author use to describe the deer condition were disturbing. I could relate to the character in the story who took pity for the animal. I think more people should consider caring for animal suffering.

Why I Want a Wife

     In Judy Brady's essay "Why I want a Wife" (1972) she states that she would like to have a wife that would do everything for her (Brady).  The author mentions all the chores and tasks that she would give to her wife to do.  The author wrote this essay in order to demonstrate that the job of a housewife is not only full-time, but is a round-the-clock job.  The author wrote this essay for all wives,
especially those of which feel over-worked and under-appreciated.

     When I first started reading this essay, I smiled because, I have said something very similar one day to my husband when I was discussing with him my dislike for cleaning the bathrooms.  Even though I love a spotless bathroom, I hate the actual work that it takes to make it spotless, and so I made a remark about how I wished that I had a wife to clean the bathrooms for me, like my husband does.  I think all wives have a chore that they wish they could assign to someone else.  However, as I continued reading this essay, I noticed that there was really no responsibility that she wanted to keep for herself.  If her point was to show how unsupportive her own husband was to helping her around the house and with the children, the author only demonstrated her desire to treat someone else the way she feels her husband is treating her.  The description the author gives as a perfect "wife" sounded more like she was describing a maid or Wonder Woman.  I was also left wondering if the author, in thinking about all her responsibilities actually appreciated her husband for working hard and keeping a job, making the money that pays the bills, groceries,etc, and allowing her to be able to stay home with the children without having to leave them in the care of others. 

     Brady uses a lot of sarcastic remarks, and her background as a prominent feminist shines through, as she  makes her claim that she, as a wife, does everthing pertaining to housework and raising the children, while portraying her husband to be selfish and unsupportive..  for example, "I want a wife to make sure my children eat properly and are clean." (107), and in her statement that she(Brady) wants a wife that will take the children to the park and the zoo (108) which suggests that her husband never assists her with resposibilities with the children nor does he join his family on outings and that he leaves all the responsibility to his wife.  The statement the author makes about wanting to have the liberty to replace her wife with another one(109) also demonstrates the selfishness of the husband.

Black Men and Public Space

    In Brent Staples Black Men and Public Space (1996), Staples claims that because he was a black man, strangers  felt intimidated whenever he was near them.  The author recounts a few incidents in which people were frightened by his presence.  The author wrote this article in order to inform his readers that in judging others, we often forget that the ones we misjudge are human and have feelings too.  The author's audience is anyone who may have judged someone else because of the way they look.

     As a woman, I can honestly say that whenever I go to  downtown Atlanta, a different country, or even in a store parking lot, I like to be aware of my surroundings.  I try to avoid any person, male or female, no matter what race, that may be acting strangely.  Realistically, we all know that this world can be a dangerous place and we all need to be cautious.  People get robbed, raped, and even murdered everyday.  Unfortunatly, it is the bad seeds in every race that gives everyone else of their race a bad name. I have been fortunate enough to have friends from  different countries, and I know that there are good and bad in every race, therefore, when I  do judge someone, it's because of their actions.  I find it sad that not everyone feels the same way.   As a very sensitive person, I know that I would feel very isolated if people avoided me because of the way I looked, or because my accent was different, or even just because I was different from them.  
     This informative article shows the readers how being feared by others caused the author to realize that where fear was involved , his own saftey could be in jeopardy.  The author states that "Where fear and weapons meet,... there is always the possibility of death."
    

Thirty-Eight Who Saw Murder Didn't Call the Police

"Thirty-Eight Who Saw Murder Didn't Call the Police" is an essay by Martin Gansberg that investigates a murder case that had thirty-eight witnesses. The essay explains the victim’s intention and the criminal’s actions.

Catherine Genovese was a twenty-eight-year-old who was going home after a very normal day at work. She was stalked as she headed towards her apartment and was stabbed by a mysterious man. She screamed “Oh, my God, he stabbed me! Please help me! Please help me!” but no one ever did. A man in the upper apartments convinced the criminal to leave. The criminal shrugged his shoulders and headed towards a white sedan. Once the apartment lights faded, he was back. He stabbed her again and made her shriek “I’m dying!” Windows busted open and lights cut on, but still no one actually helped. The criminal drove away. He came back and was looking into the doors of the apartments. She was discovered at the bottom of the steps struggling. She was fatally stabbed for the third time. It took thirty minutes for the police to be contacted. Within those thirty minutes, Ms. Genovese had been stabbed three times and killed. The killer was Winston Moseley. He had a wife and two kids. When he was questioned by police, he admitted to two other killings.

The point of writing this essay was carried out thoroughly. It brings awareness to me and it’s making me angry. This is another flaw in humanity that I wish I could have discussed in my concept paper. People are chipping away. Some people who were questioned said that they didn’t want to be involved and others said that they didn’t know why they didn’t call. This makes the lack of compassion really evident to me. It is an essay that couldn’t save Ms. Genovese, but has saved me from making such an idiotic mistake.

Behind the Formaldehyde Curtain

            In Behind the Formaldehyde Curtain, Jessica Mitford explains the ins and outs of the embalming procedure. She makes up an imaginary Mr. Jones as the person that is getting embalmed. She describes the very complicated procedure of embalming by describing the types of fillers instruments that are used.

            She describes how people used to stay by the embalmer’s side to watch the procedure and how today we are persuaded to avoid witnessing this procedure. She first explains the dermasurgeon’s tools. He or she will use scalpels, scissors, clamps, augers, bowls, basins, needles, pumps, tubes, and forceps. He or she then uses their large array of pastes, oils, powders, creams, fluids, and sprays to soften tissue and to restore moisture. For the less fortunate Mr. Jones subjects, plaster will be used to replace any missing limbs. A slight incision is made to remove the blood. Once that step is done, the embalming fluid is chosen. Then the skin tone must be applied. These come in tints such as Regular Cosmetic Tint, Suntan, and Special Cosmetic Tint. Gallons of solution of formaldehyde are then put into Mr. Jones body. His mouth is sewn shut with a needle and his teeth are coated with colorless nail polish. If Mr. Jones’ head had been missing, they would have trimmed the edges and sewn the head on with wires and sutures. They remove tissue from swollen parts of the body. Once that is all done, Mr. Jones is washed, shaved, and given a manicure. Once he is dressed, he is positioned at a slight angle in the casket.

            This passage was very disturbing. I don’t think there is any reason the embalmer’s wouldn’t want people to watch the procedure. I just believe that people do not want to witness it. I certainly would not. I learned a lot of behind the scenes information in this passage. It has opened my eyes about the embalming process and Jessica Mitford has definitely informed me about what’s behind the formaldehyde curtain.

That's How I Roll

     In the essay entitled That's How I Roll written by Ginney Donaldson (December 3, 2009), Donaldson explores the origen of the phrase "that's how I roll" and that many of us use cliche phrases without ever knowing how or when the phrases came about.  Donaldson searches sites such as Google and the Urban Dictionary Online to discover not only when this phrase first began, but also it's meaning.  I believe Donaldson was not only satisfying her own curiosity by her investigations, but also causing an awareness in each of us, young or old, of how often we say silly phrases without ever knowing how they came about. 
     I liked the way Donaldson showed persistence in her quest for finding the meaning of the phrase"that's how I roll" and didn't give up her search for her answer until she was satisfied with her results.  I experienced something similar to this situation, but, the other way around.  A few years ago, while reading Oedipus At Colonus which was written by Sophocles,  I came upon a familiar sounding question in which Theseus asked Creon in a conversation, "Dost thou take my drift?"  I was amazed that this phrase was used so long ago even though it has evolved over time to,"do you catch my drift".
   I believe Donaldson writes this article in a way to relate to other students because she begins her essay by stating that she was in class.  She also references the Urban Dictionary which is a current resource which relates to a younger and hipper crowd.   She says that slang is "shorter words or phrases [used] to be more understandable", which shows that she sees an importance to using slang.  This puts her on the same level as the students who are reading her essay.

Why Leaves Turn Color in the Fall

In the story Why Leaves Turn Color in the Fall by Diane Ackerman, she briefly explain the process of how leaves change in the season of Fall. First she starts off by talking about how the leaves get their color. Sunlight is the key answer to this process. Ackerman also mention the best range of fall foliage in the United States and China. The pigment Anthocyanin plays a part in the leaves color. Not all leaves turn the same color though. Towards the end Ackerman describes how the leaves fall. As the leaf age, the growth hormone, auxin, fades, and the cells at the base of the petiole divide. Before the leaves leave they turn color and as Ackerman say you can hear them crackle underneath your feet.

While reading this story, the words and comparisons Ackerman used to describe this whole process caught my attention. I could almost visualize the way the whole process happens. One interesting fact that caught my attention was when Ackerman told where the word fall originated from. It originated from the Old English word feallan and it means to fall. The season Fall is beautiful and peaceful. Reading this story reminds me of a great thing about Fall. Overall, the story was great.